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How do you like this poem?

It's the little things you do
Just the simplest things
That bring a smile to my face
And bright stars to my eyes

When you hold me close
and whisper you love me
those are the precious moments
i feel most alive

The way your dark hair curls
just above those lethal, green eyes
has an affect on me
thats impsossible to describe

Its sort of like falling and flying at once
like coming together and breaking apart
i dont ever know what is louder when you come near
is it the pounding in my ears or the beat of my heart?

Of all the uncertainties that loving you brings
there is one thing i know will always hold true
out of every single person in the world
I know im the luckiest because i have you

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1 week ago
I would like to mention that i am fifteen years old. I wrote this in ten minutes before my boyfriend left for our 7 months. Thank you so much for everyone who gave feedback. I hope all of you have a wonderful day. Thanks.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 1 week ago
I would like to mention that i am fifteen years old. I wrote this in ten minutes before my boyfriend left for our 7 months. Thank you so much for everyone who gave feedback. I hope all of you have a wonderful day. Thanks.