I posted this poem before I didnt get to many responses, I need some real feed b

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I posted this poem before I didnt get to many responses, I need some real feed back...?

You have to read this poem with a tempo...

Babylon...

Conceive true deception multiplied a million fold
Visualize the yin and yang in a battle so intense
that we get em confused
The resident evil specialize in misconstruing
We wanna be at a presidential level -- what are we doing?
Foolin ourself, clownin ourself, playin ourself
By not bein ourself
We can't babble no more than we can bob our head offbeat
Nimrod by the time we forty cause we can't get our meat
While we ask no reason for the misplacement of the season
look at the picture that's painted
Tainted as the mind who's blinded to the point
where Sodomites get all the rights
We fall for fights with fisticuffs
Get pissed enough to miss the bus
It disgusts me to see my folks run up on
I say stand up on deception of time all of Revelations
And recognize this mind on the reality of horror
known as mankind
Jesus and his twelve disciples make thirteen
A righteous number of righteous men
Even Judas the Betrayer came true in the end
The Devil say the end is the beginning
They teach that we were the product of incest
Invest no level of self into their system of Paganomics
Stand with us and don't look back upon it
Just face this mindstate
Otherwise Babylon...

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1 week ago
Note to every one who reads this poem, this is a def poem...

Meaning it's read with a tempo, hence forth the slang...

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 1 week ago
Note to every one who reads this poem, this is a def poem...

Meaning it's read with a tempo, hence forth the slang...