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Poem .Sending out an S.O.S?Criticicts welcome?
Hangin on, fallin, but faith lies deep in my spirit
It will work itself out,dont feel it,but why do I fear it
Over and over same ole thing,just enough to survive
Workin hard,hangin on to the chains,its all a strive
S.O.S.gainin ground,but pushed back down
Tears flow inside,like a sad circus clown
Tryin eagerly,somethin finally works
Lookin better,but then it falls right back down
Im weary of this mess,I have to call fo S,O,S.
It will end,It's not my choice when,I wont say why
Been there thats no deal.I can't tell you why I cry
It has to get better,Im just weary,workin so hard
Just to find out,my back is against the wall
I will break loose,from this,S.O.S I made the call
My spirit,is free,the world aint right,its just to hard
You say no it's not,but you my dear didnt get my card
Help is near,lying to say there is no fear
Finaly He comes to wipe my last tear
I gave up hope,I have to admit
I tried to hold on but finally I quit
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
You won't be able to call yourself a poet (poetess, actually) until you can convey everything you say in this poem in just one or two lines.