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Poem .Sending out an S.O.S?Criticicts welcome?

Hangin on, fallin, but faith lies deep in my spirit

It will work itself out,dont feel it,but why do I fear it

Over and over same ole thing,just enough to survive

Workin hard,hangin on to the chains,its all a strive

S.O.S.gainin ground,but pushed back down

Tears flow inside,like a sad circus clown

Tryin eagerly,somethin finally works

Lookin better,but then it falls right back down

Im weary of this mess,I have to call fo S,O,S.

It will end,It's not my choice when,I wont say why

Been there thats no deal.I can't tell you why I cry

It has to get better,Im just weary,workin so hard

Just to find out,my back is against the wall

I will break loose,from this,S.O.S I made the call

My spirit,is free,the world aint right,its just to hard

You say no it's not,but you my dear didnt get my card

Help is near,lying to say there is no fear

Finaly He comes to wipe my last tear

I gave up hope,I have to admit

I tried to hold on but I finally quit

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1 week ago
thyanx nate I put the y in on purpose


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thyanx nate I put the y in on purpose