Question:
Honest opinions on my poem?
Why me?
why is it so hard to be me,
why is it such a discomfort to be living,
for what reason does life throws itself at me this way,
why am i being treated like a stray,
never will i ever want to remember this day or this year,
because it will only bring back memories of fear,
if only theres someone to wipe away my tears,
someone to pull me away from the pain,
an umbrella to keep me from the rain,
its such a shame,
not knowing when it will change,
but still trying your hardest to stay sane,
its hard being young and alone,
like your the only one who hears the tone, of your voice when you scream for help,
like nobody has felt what you felt,
and before you wipe those tears from your eyes to see,
you ask Why me?
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Awesome!
I really know where you are coming from and at one point in my life this poem would have applied to me. I can really relate. It doesn't sound forced. Totally natural. Keep it up. Getting the hurt out on paper is the best way to express your pain!