Here is my poem to start tuesday. Comments please.? From the Dark Prince to yo

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Here is my poem to start tuesday. Comments please.? From the Dark Prince to you.?

lies

Why can't you understand, destiny in my hand,
Trying to escape this time,someplace I've never been.
No one could prepare me for the things I've left to do,
Tears come forth, no remorse, barren, horrid land.

Lie's, deception, misdirection, places left to see,
Mountain tops, desert rocks, valley of the damned.
Can't quite seem to find myself, help me if you can,
Won't this trip be worth it, to find tranquility.

I can't decide the way to go, pulled this way and that,
Donkeys speak, rabbits leap, my last soliloquy.
Speaking with a gnome I found, under a broken sky,
Thunder boomed, I feel the doom, crimson alley cat.

This sentimental journey, still lost just like before,
Stronger than I've ever been, weak as a new born child.
Try as I might, can't fight this night, bargains I have made,
Help me through this tragedy, my mind is an open sore.

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1 week ago
Nightserf,

Contact me via email and I can give you the info you seem to need. I don't really like to explain my work as each poem means something different to each person. The poem is one of many in my journals, that is true, but this is about a very real occurence in my life. I will explain it to you if you write.

Steve

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 1 week ago
Nightserf,

Contact me via email and I can give you the info you seem to need. I don't really like to explain my work as each poem means something different to each person. The poem is one of many in my journals, that is true, but this is about a very real occurence in my life. I will explain it to you if you write.

Steve