I am publishing my own collection of poems. Please critique the following poem.

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I am publishing my own collection of poems. Please critique the following poem...thanx?

Semi-Colon Cancer......by Jason Entrigardida

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I feel your poem had a lot of feeling. It made me cry.