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What do you think of my poem?

Is it too much for you
The truth, reality, what they do
Close your eyes and escape
Imagine a new landscape
Hide the truth and leave the world
Create your own
One thats unknown
To others who pass you by
Perfection in your eyes

Leave truth and knowledge behind
Where fantasy and space bind
In a reality your own
To others completely unknown
Watch the harshness fly
Where peace and tranquility never die
The dream becomes reality
Perfection comes easily
And the eyes open to a new life
To live, enjoy, and experience
Close your eyes and escape
To a new landscape


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: very "moody blues-ish"
right up my alley.