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Here is my first poem on this forum.What do you think?I've been writing poetry for many years.please comment.

Falling in Love
Falling in love is not falling low.
It's like snow that falls on earth and
gives it's innocence back
or
like leaves fall in autumn
to give way to a new life in spring.
Falling in love ,it's like night falls
in the arms of day and enfolds it
or
like a river falls into a big ocean
and becomes a part of the big flow.

Falling in love,it's rising high.

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1 week ago
dk you too are on this forum and commented on this poem.It means it is not that underestimated.

1 week ago
I think that most of rhyming kills the intensity of feelings and it sounds very mechanical.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 1 week ago
dk you too are on this forum and commented on this poem.It means it is not that underestimated.