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Rate My poem please!!!!?

It is called Light

When you say light what do you know
Is it from a lightbulb or on tv from your favorite show
Light is God light is true
Light is there to comfort you
From when you scared in the dark
or you hear the scary dog bark
To your computer screen
Or the special strobe light for this scene
Or is light something more then just a flick of color
Is it something that is meant to bring us closer to each other
With no light I couldn't see your face
With no light our hearts would be as dark as space
Light is amazing a treasure indeed
So having you light my candle is a need


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: good but not very deep.I like the last 6 lines.They say all.