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Do you like my new poem?

I hear tomtom calling
Dark forest echoes
I feel drums beating through tall grass

On crest a signal fire
Warns great danger
Ride away to spirits pointing

I see a totem gesture
Signs pathways ending
I hear Grandfathers
From herds up in the sky

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1 week ago
Todd, try this one on top of the old Hamm's beer tune..."From the land of sky blue waters..."

1 week ago
Tom, no stick waived at you...this is a recognition of wisdom...


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 1 week ago
Todd, try this one on top of the old Hamm's beer tune..."From the land of sky blue waters..."