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Plz hepl! im stuck!?

im tying to sorta write a fantasy-witch story, but please, please help! i have a ton of rough spots where i need help and need to change it a bit so its not so history-based. anymore action or ideas for the plot would be most-appreciated!

plot: A poor family live in poverty for about a decade and a half, but the dad goes off and marries the queen since the king dies, but he does it for their need of money - he sends them the riches they need. The mom and the three daughters continue to live in their small home at the edge of the village near a forest. One day, the queen finds out that the new king's daughters are smart and blames them as witches just because the king disagreed with her on something. But nobody knew until one day, the dad saw that the queen was a friend of an accused witch, which would probably get her into a deal of trouble. The daughters, meanwhile, encounter many creatures in the forest, while the dad tries to save them, get the queen caught and ostracized from

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1 week ago
society. The king also stays king and once the queen is no longer queen, he is most powerful and rises the accuse and lets everyone know that his daughters are not witches, simply what they are, smart. So then the treaty of the witch-hunt mabober gets signed and no one is further accused.

i need help on some of the plot to make it more fantasy and the spots where it hardly makes any sense. -the ending too. your opinion would also be loads of help! lol...thanks


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 1 week ago
society. The king also stays king and once the queen is no longer queen, he is most powerful and rises the accuse and lets everyone know that his daughters are not witches, simply what they are, smart. So then the treaty of the witch-hunt mabober gets signed and no one is further accused.

i need help on some of the plot to make it more fantasy and the spots where it hardly makes any sense. -the ending too. your opinion would also be loads of help! lol...thanks