Question:
My little Poem?
here is one of the small little rhymes i wrote what do ya think?
a sleepless night of thoughts and fears
and before i realize it , i feel the tears
they fall from my eyes like rain from the sky
coming from within my heart and soul tonight
i can't make them stop but yet embrace them now
a feeling of release has come over me somehow
why they came is a mystery to me
and now a little clearer i may see
my eyes are no longer clouded tonight it seems
and now i lay down to drift off and dream
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It's gentle, I like it.