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You like??

Oh! Tell me you love me
I won't ask for more
Leave me,
Believe me
I won't ask for more
Just say you are here
In my heart for today
I treasure your love
But you don't have to stay

I just made this up--It can be taken in two different ways. One in a funny light, one in a softer light. Tell me what you think!:-)


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: :) I think it's cute, very nice. I Liek the "Oh!" it sets a good tone. Nice work. And I see what you mean the funnier/softer tones, works either way, not bad at all ;)

Keep writing!