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What do you think of my poem "In Dreams"?

Hand to heart we bind ourselves
With thin ribbons of rainbow
and gold sunflower petals.
Amid a spectrum of rays,
A thousand colors bring us
Closer to absolution
While crystal waves rise and fall
In a sea of sun and moon.
Bewitched, we are like sailors
Flowing toward a siren's song
Dancing under surf, preserved
By remnants of our passion.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: i reallly like the imagery.

and they lines about the sirens.
i like how the reader has this idea fo love, and then the imagery really makes the idea of love 'move'.

i like it...