Please Tell me what you think of these poems?

Question:

Please tell me what you think of these two poems... im expecting alot of negative feedback, just please tell me what you think.
http://allpoetry.com/pentacle%20of%20hop...

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1 week ago
i added two more up, please tell me what you think of them!

1 week ago
Okay, i added one more...

1 week ago
Im not really emo by the way....

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 1 week ago
i added two more up, please tell me what you think of them!