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What do you think of my poem? It was written three days after my Dad passed away.?

JUST A TEARDROP AWAY

I knew no man with a warmer heart
A giving nature was just one part
With sadness in his eyes
And a smile on his face
With a pain in his heart
That years couldn't erase
At times we were close
Never too far away
He gave comfort with a hug
And hope for a new day
I pray that he knew of my love for him
From a daughter to a Dad
And from deep within
The time that we shared
Brought us laughter and tears
Always appropriate through the years
Life still goes on, Dad
though you're not here
But I'll never forget you or your love
Not for minute, a day or a year


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: really well-writtten poem-I can tell it came straight from the heart-i'm sure he would be very happy to know that you loved him so much and that you cared so much so that you even wrote such a heart-tugging poem...i loved it!