What do you think about this one?

Question:

What do you think about this one?

I've read a lot of the extatic poetry of Mirabai, a Hindu poet prophetess, and this poem is - I hope - in her style.

I dance in the darkenss all night without fear
for You fill me with Your light.
The Bright One is my Master.
Just a sight, a sound, a taste of Him makes me complete.
Let me come to You, Bright One
Cinna is Your servant.

(Mirabai calls herself Mira in several of her poems ... so I yoinked that idea as well.)

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: your the champ ,what can i say
you blow me away
please call me tonight after 5
my phone is on
your a damn good poet, babe
love paul bradley