Another Poem for the mistreated ... RpG...?

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Another Poem for the mistreated ... RpG...?

DEath wish

I tore out my heart and fed it to you on a platter
You chewed it up and spat it in my face
I bled my veins and gave it to you as wine
You drank it and said it had a bad taste
I cried for you and swallowed my tears
You saw me crying and knew my fears
I built an empire for you to enjoy
You destroyed it in one punch
I gave you freedom
You gave me hell
I gave you all
You didn??t care
You stomped on my hands
You covered my mouth
When you should of let me breathe
You bruised my pride
And stole my dignity
All for nothing, emptiness
Now my head is pounding??pounding??pounding
I look in the mirror I see nothing ,
Someone still looks back at me,
A lifeless smile a lifeless being,
Silent whispers in my ear
A chill up my spine
I have so much to redefine
lifeless demon
shadow in the night
I really need to die,
Do you know why?
You took away my life ??
Hesitation , sharpened knife
I still need to die
And wish I knew why?

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I love this. It looks like something I would write. Very compelling and angry and sad at the same time. Very good. Check out some of mine. You might like them.