What about this poem I wrote?Please be honest.?

Question:

What about this poem I wrote?Please be honest.?

Each time I close my eyes,
Your face floats in.
Bringing thoughts of those painful memories.
That unforgivable Sin.

I close my eyes
to ease the pain.
I close my ears
to block the sound of rain.

But I see your face;smiling.
It's haunting me.
And Those echoing words;
Ring in my ears
Leave me paralyzed.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I think its really great. The first and second stanza flow quite well, and the third adds another element that closes the poem well. The only suggestion that I have is to edit the second-to-last line a little, maybe have them rhyme with one of the other lines? Either way, it's great!