Do you like this poem i wrote???i guess its kinda sad tell me what you think of

Question:

Do you like this poem i wrote???i guess its kinda sad tell me what you think of it?

My feelings are being killed
All I feel is hurt
This is a stage in my life when i start to feel like dirt
I'm always happy when my friends are beside me
Now it feels like my heart has been ripped from inside me

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: It is a sad poem. It stops abruptly without an ending.

How about this
" This is a stage in my life when i start to feel like dirt,
All I feel is hurt
Now it feels like my heart has been ripped from inside me
my friends are no longer beside me."

Then, I were you, I would explain what has happened between you and your friends. I think it's a good start.