I need help for my book!?

Question:

I need help for my book!?

My story is about two 19 year olds that fall madly in love. In the end I want it to send chills down peoples backs. Like right after they get married, I just don't know what to write yet. I've been working on it for a while but the people who have suggested my other question didn't help as much so I need real help from people who won't goof off. I'm a very serious writer. If you have any suggestions please tell me. Thanks ♥

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: By chills, do you mean something dark is revealed or are you going for the romantic angle of it?

If you are going for something thrilling, perhaps you can have a mysterious stalker that is going after the female character. Perhaps this stalker sends her a text message or a mysterious phone call every once and a while.

(The guy calls - but doesn't say anything. Maybe he just breathes heavily. Or if he does speak - he uses a voice distorter and says something cryptic.)

Make the stalker disappear for a while in the story. Then bring him back every time and again.

After the couple gets married, have the stalker send a message - whether it be email or a text message - that says, "You have now fallen into my trap." (or something similar). Then end the story.

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