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Thoughts on my poem, 'Jealousy'?

In a raging storm of jealousy and hate
I tried to confront and interfere with fate
In my jealousy I feel betrayed, I am like mad
Longing for your unshared love, my eyes so sad

I want to replace her in your heart
I want to see you leave her in some dark part
Of your past somewhere, to see only me
To uncover with your hands my full mystery

I want to hear you scream my name
To ask me insistently where from I came
To see you in agony on the ground
Till the moment you will have me found


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: That is very good. I really like it.

If I may offer a suggestion, though. The middle paragraph, the 2nd and 3rd lines kind of run together. You have established a good rythem throughout the whole poem, but those two lines don't really follow it. You may get away with changing the word Of, to In your past.... or Put her in your past somewhere........
Just a suggestion, though. It is very good.

Stevo