Do you like this one?

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Do you like this one?

Act 1, Scene 1.
Curtain up, queue the chorus.
Hope the audience adores us.
Playwrite??s words,
Command performance.
Dramatic, comedic, somber, uproarious.

Long flowing hair.
Time??s turning leaf.
Canine clown ads comic relief.
Laughter, tears,
Intermission,
Whispered critiques, disbelief.

Act 3, Finale.
Heroes lost in a storm.
Nerves tingle, hearts warm.
Dying embrace, a kiss.
Applause, curtain calls.
Not a dry eye in the room.
Success!

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2 days ago
Todd's right. It needs a stanza between 2 & 3...

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 2 days ago
Todd's right. It needs a stanza between 2 & 3...