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How do you like my poem 'To Feel'?

Lonely, wandering among those who had fallen in love
Among those who were feeling both good and bad, both calm and mad
He realized he was frozen
Nothing could affect him, not even happiness
He could feel nothing except for emptiness
No more restlessness
No more jealousy, no more hate
He was dead, though physically living
Trying desperately to throw away his emotional armour
To live life once again with so much ardour
Ten years were supposed to pass
Till this curse would fade away
To live once more there was a price to pay
To get through both joy and pain
To walk under both bright sunshine and heavy rain
Never to kill the pain.


LOVE LIFE, EVEN THE BAD PARTS. TO FEEL SOMETHING IS BETTER THAN TO FEEL NOTHING AT ALL.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: If I didn't now better, I would say you wrote this about me. If I'm wrong...ok, but if I'm right, thanks I love it.