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I just wrote this..want your opinions? I just moved to Canada with my loved one and we are trying to connect.?

You have a life
I have none
Except for the one
With you.

You have a family
I have none
Except for the one
I knew

Starting over ain't easy
I wonder what you'd do
And if some way, some how
Could I make it easy for you?


Could I understand your dreams
If you cried in the night
Or if you begged for understanding
And prayed for just a light

It's not the cold or the weather
Whether or not I stay
It's just that I need to make it
And see the light of day

So give me just a chance
To only be myself
Let's put the past behind us
Let's place it on a shelf


And everynow and then
We'll pull it off and look
We'll read it carefully and then
Close the cover on the book

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1 week ago
I moved up here after Hurricane Katrina..lost everything I knew. So have been kinda lost.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 1 week ago
I moved up here after Hurricane Katrina..lost everything I knew. So have been kinda lost.