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Suicide???.....Hardly?

Just wondering wether i'm decent or wether i should just quit.


The Madness

The madness has spread
As the Darkness falls the thoughts dwell
An escape from the ordinary
An escape from reason
The overpowering battle of minds
Between darkness and light
But as light comes, also come shadow
The evergrowing shadow
It comes as sure as a heart beat
Only fleeting when the beats have ceased
A refuge of sorts
Gods gift
But never waste the dark
Never waste the battle
For without the battle there is no victory
And without victory there is death


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I like it! You should keep it up for sure! I like the imagery that you use in the poem, it evokes a lot of thoughts...

Xotchil