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Is this a good poem? Trustful comments, please.?

As I sit here,
Next to the hospital bed,
I'm waiting for you to wake up.
But I know you won??t wake up.
Well, at least not with the love
That you had for me before.
I can live without you being alive.
But I can??t live without you being dead.
I cant wait no more.
I??m going home
And taking the fault of your suicidal death.
I??ll pull the trigger of my own gun,
Not knowing that you live or not.


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