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Writing to quiet demons is never easy. Comments???

preoccupied

Theres blood on the floor,
And you're not moving.
Is the blood yours or mine?
But you're not moving.

Eyes wide as you grin at me,
Theres a place you'd rather be.
But if you die and I survive,
I couldn't go on knowing I'm alive.

Theres a best deep within me,
Forcing me to feed my needs.
Yeah he's in me,
And we're here to end our fears.

Goodbye to all the tears,
Time to start a new life.
On the other side of the river,
My world would be over.

Hold on, I won't be long,
Wait for me,
I won't be long,
Theres no rush to the other side.

Look at yourself,
That look in your eye.
Smiling wide,
And preoccupied.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: To those that don't understand, your like a "sink hole". You can stop sinking at any level, depending on the mental debt and how much one is willing except. The element of "preoccupation" is that special moment to make your move, with no one being any wiser, to what one is up too. To understand the dark, you have to of lived in the light. The choices we make are based on the effect of how one preceives. Whether we lived or observed it. To write what we feel unleashes the brain to attack and combat the nightmares we get lost in. The contemplatetion of life! To find a place where there is no "pain" would only be feasible in another horizon "To reside in a suitable location, to have good past deeds done, to set oneself in the right direction, this is a blessing supreme",. . . this is a different journey for each of one of us. I feel so much from your writings, and I also feel a presences. Maybe you are not aware of that which walks with you. Keep putting your words out there, you will touch those you will never know. :)