No rhyming...ok I'll give it a shot. To Heather B who suggested it.?

Question:

No rhyming...ok I'll give it a shot. To Heather B who suggested it.?

taken by force

The women in my life, I'll never undrstand,
There lips smooth, Yeah I hear what their saying.
We'll make love by firelight, sharing one cigarette,
Shall I prove what I'm saying, begging, playing, craving.

In my bedroom one hundred candles burning,
As her hips move, I can hear what their saying.
Girl I want to die with you, in each others arms,
Since this is the last time, can I hold you all nite long?

A lonely gray girl, guards the river ...she hates me,
Side by side were counting cracks, just to pass the time.
Like a bird, she flew away, to chase her dreams again,
Left me behind to try and find, blacklight and true sin.

The even mist that creeps and crawls, growing cold,
I struggle to be freed from cold ground, terified my love.
Throughout these woods, ecstatic screams,
I can tell instictivley what it is your saying, praying.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile,
and finds in your presence that life is worth while.
So when you are lonely, remember it's true
Somebody somewhere is thinking of you.

magnifico! I like them with and without rhyming. Thanks and it was beautiful...

Keep writing!