Question:
What do you think??? Poem??
My head on your chest
The sound of your beating heart
I lay there wide awake with the feeling of your breath on my neck
I ran my hand down your soft face and you lie there motionless and in a deep sleep
I stroke your hair and you pull me closer to you as if to say ??I love you?? while you sleep
When I fall asleep you awaken and look over and kiss my closed eye lids ever so gently
I awaken once more only to see darkness and feel your warm lips on my cheek
My alarm clock beeps telling me to wake up I get out of bed and brush my hair thinking about my dream the whole time
??Was it a dream??? I ask myself.
??But??????.. it felt so real.??
I wait so soundly for that dream to come again for I love to be with you in person and in dream.
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This is a very typical poem.
Was it a dream? etc...
It is very cliche
Read some poems and you will start to see the diverse way you can explore the worlds through rhythm, metaphors and abstract thought.