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I'm very proud of this poem, but I'd still like some opinions on it. I'm not sure of it??

I think it's missing something... Somethings off on it.... A little help with that would be greatly appreciated. Even more so if you could fallow this link to my poem...?

http://allpoetry.com/user/show/celsius...

Thank ya kindly!

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1 week ago
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 1 week ago
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