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Is this a good poem?

Remeberance of Love

The night reminds me of you,
the day to.

Joy reminds me of you,
sorrow to.

Life remebers,
until
loves' last emebers

burn in the flames
of life's joys and pains.


critique please?


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: PERFECT! I really adored it, very emotional, it touched me...