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Position:Home>Arts & Humanities> Hey, I need help on the finishing lines to this poem. You think it's ok, or shouQuestion: Hey, I need help on the finishing lines to this poem. You think it's ok, or should i change it?Everywhere I look you seem to be there. Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: That is a good poem. I don't think you should change it- it is good the way it is. I don't think it needs anymore- it is soo deep by itself... well, if you do add anything, it will still be a pretty poem. |