Read if your're bored... It's a Poem ... Please comment...?

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Read if your're bored... It's a Poem ... Please comment...?

Beneath the dying Oak tree shade of blistering heat
Soil still so dry lay my printed feet
A mystery a romance all of them in hand
A battle a dive all of them in sand
Pillow so soft so feathery still
Take me away to imaginary hills
Full of flowers and some corn
And how bout it, a unicorn!
The moon and the sun the stars altogether
Saturn and Venus creating the weather
Bring me a Lover a hat and a sword
Bring them to me can??t you see that I am bored?

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6 days ago
Yes I wrote it he he he thank you for the comments very nice to hear and one more thing I meant to be funny and corny he he he. Ok well have a good day :-)

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 6 days ago
Yes I wrote it he he he thank you for the comments very nice to hear and one more thing I meant to be funny and corny he he he. Ok well have a good day :-)