Can you dig a little twelve bar blues?

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Can you dig a little twelve bar blues?

Blues for a Darkened Knight (Twelve Bar Blues)

There's eight bars on my window
And twelve bars on my door
I said there's eight bars on my window
And twelve bars on my door
And there's twelve bars down on Main Street
And that's what I'm in here for.

As I went south on Main Street,
I stopped in every bar.
I headed south on Main Street,
I stopped in every bar.
Had eight glasses of whiskey,
Twelve beers, and there we are.

I staggered north on Main Street
'Twas all that I could do
You know I staggered north on Main Street,
'Twas all that I could do
Just looking for my Baby,
And that's when I found you.

I know you had your pistol,
And I just had my knife,
Yes I know you had your pistol
And I just had my knife
It didn't make no difference,
My rage cut off your life.

There's eight bars on my window
And twelve bars on my door
I said there's eight bars on my window
And twelve bars on my door
And twelve steps on the gallows
That's where I'm headed for.

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