Here's another just to contemplate. Comments.?????

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Here's another just to contemplate. Comments.?????

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She burned me down,
Down to the ground.
Blood thicker than water,
Much harder to clean up.

You always get the evil end,
When the weapon is love.
Whether an acquaintance,
Or just another stranger.

Family, friends simple mistakes,
Pissed off and dissappointed.
I prey to learn to forgive them,
Then I'd have no reason to live.

Here is an education professed,
The lesson here is quite cruel.
Somethings are worse than death,
And one of them is you.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Shoot! Nothing to critique, just a well constructed, well integrated poem whose structure sets a searing tone and with a last line at which you could aim a cruise missile--which you did. First rate!