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My poem "Moon Lover"?

As I close my eyes I vison them
holwling a pitiful cry
to the only light on the chilled, frostbit night
A rustle
A moan
As a howling hush
beats apon the mellow night
as I close my eyes and dream....


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I really, really like it. But yes, 'vison' should be 'envision'....so just watch the spelling there. I really like 'a howling hush' it's so fun to say!!!
yes, very good use of imagery...i could hear it, see it, and feel it.
SPECTACULAR!!! keep it up!!