Poem, please may I have your opinions, thank you.?

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Poem, please may I have your opinions, thank you.?

My Faith.

Stood in the wilderness in breezes gone by,
Frozen in ice with no sense of time,
Vision so bleak in darkened skies,
Will the Lord forgive me for losing his guide,
My head hangs in pity for I,
No longer a saint,
A sinner feared blind.

For the sin I created,
So fearful in me,
For I forgot for one dear second,
My lord would always believe in me.

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6 days ago
Kara p: I wrote this when I was going through a bad patch in my life so it is based on my thorts and emotions at the time.

Michael G. This is my own work, Its not from a song, I am glad that you abd everybody else like it.

Thanks for all the nice comments.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 6 days ago
Kara p: I wrote this when I was going through a bad patch in my life so it is based on my thorts and emotions at the time.

Michael G. This is my own work, Its not from a song, I am glad that you abd everybody else like it.

Thanks for all the nice comments.