Please critique my poem?

Question:

Please critique my poem?

Across the moor, on a bonnie bricht night,
Mr. Holmes and his sidekick came across a strange sight.
A dark old house that had seen better weather
Stood out amongst the hillside heather.
Upon closer inspection,
And careful detection,
Mr. Holmes deduced something strange.
Its single door hinge
Was the color orange
Not your typical home on the range.

The garish hinge supported a door
Like a bungalow at Bag End, but still there's more . . .
The door was shaped like a citrus fruit.
And was painted the color yellow to boot.
Opening the door, as Sherlock walked in,
He muttered the words, "A lemon entry, dear Watson."

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I think a diagnosis of Tylerdurdenosis appropriate. Clearly an adaptation from Hound of the Basketoffruitovilles. The tale of an avenging citrus devil dog with questionable taste in exterior decor. Bag End? Is the central character in this prose Sherlock Hobbit Homes certainly the name has a ring to it. I think there must be something in the Y!Rules about the mention of Hobbits. Let me just consult my leather bound tome. Flick flick flick Ah Yes here it is Rule 56734 "Prohibits mention of Hobbit residences except in circumstances where Hobbits play a leading and ethnically diverse role." mmmmmmm I guess you just about scrape by on that one. Hang on though! What this? Flagrant blah blah blah orange blah blah blah poetry section blah blah blah deleted account blah blah blah. Muhahaha muhahahahaha muhahahahahahaha muhahahahahahahahahahah muhahahahahahahahahah.