What do you think of this poem I wrote?

Question:

What do you think of this poem I wrote?

It's my first positive one because its the first positive mood I've had in a long time. I write to express my moods and make sense of them.

Peace

Is there such a thing?
Life is full of pain.
This we all know.
We live it.
Peace exists, it really does.
You just have to start looking.

Do you feel it or see it?
Yes if you are really looking.
The gust of wind brushing your face,
Do you feel it?
The sun going down as night comes,
Can you see it?

If not, then there is always tomorrow.
You will have your chance.
Peace surrounds us,
Only if you embrace it.
Enjoy it, breathe it in and hold on tight.
It might just embrace you too.

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5 days ago
I am happy to read any positive criticism. But ever hear the saying if you don't have anything nice to say, don't say anything at all?

5 days ago
Maybe for some of you who don't get it. You have to live in a world of darkness for a long period of time where you see nothing but death. You are trying to find a way out and finally I see a light at the end of the tunnel. There is some hope. And if just one person sees something good in what you wrote, then its successful.

5 days ago
I do believe in myself.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 5 days ago
I am happy to read any positive criticism. But ever hear the saying if you don't have anything nice to say, don't say anything at all?