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Position:Home>Arts & Humanities> Honestly - Terrible...Bad...OK...Good...or Excellent?Question: Honestly - Terrible...Bad...OK...Goo... Excellent?Please follow the link below and read the new addition. I have posted the third part since many people requested it. I'm afraid it is not as polished as I would like but please have a read and rate both on the blog and on Answers. Thank you Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I like it, and as you said it's a first draft. I think the first paragraph needs some strenthening. The dialogue is good and I love your setting and strong historical details. |