Question:
Poem, please comment.?
My special gift sent from above,
All wrapped up and cocooned by love,
Your ray of light so beautifully blinding,
Magic spells forever unbinding,
A crystal lake so enchantingly pure,
One second with you leaves me wanting more,
Together we fly like turtle doves,
Our wings taking us up onto the clouds of love,
My heart is your gift for eternity,
You give me yours with no doubts or uncertanties,
My special gift sent from above,
All wrapped up and cocooned by love.
Additional Details5 days ago
Thank you everyone for your comments, I really appreciate them.
Moondog: I appreciate your advice and will look through it again.
One thing I will not change is "cocooned" as I feel this is what makes it good for me.
"Changed" just does not have the same ring to it.
Thanks all the same.
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
5 days agoThank you everyone for your comments, I really appreciate them.
Moondog: I appreciate your advice and will look through it again.
One thing I will not change is "cocooned" as I feel this is what makes it good for me.
"Changed" just does not have the same ring to it.
Thanks all the same.