Poem. Please tell me what you think.?

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Poem. Please tell me what you think.?

I walk along with only I,
Shadowed by the haunting skies,
My fear sets a tremble,
I see only what I fear most,
My enemies follow like wolves in packs,
I'm not alone but with my ghosts,
I run and run,
Yet my weakness is failing me,
They catch me and I fall,
I am now one of them,
A haunted spirit roaming free.

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5 days ago
I walk along with only I,
Shadowed by the haunting skies,
Fear asser, I tremble,
I see only what I fear most,
My enemies follow like wolves,
I'm not alone but with my ghosts,
I run and run,
Yet my weakness gains on me,
They catch me and I fall,
I am now one of them,
A haunted spirit roaming free.

Thank you for your advice, I have changed it like you said.
I would love you as my teacher.
I am always looking to write better so thank you.

5 days ago
I walk along with only I,
Shadowed by the haunting skies,
Fear asserts, I tremble,
I see only what I fear most,
My enemies follow like wolves,
I'm not alone but with my ghosts,
I run and run,
Yet my weakness gains on me,
They catch me and I fall,
I am now one of them,
A haunted spirit roaming free.

Thank you for your advice, I have changed it like you said.
I would love you as my teacher.
I am always looking to write better so thank you.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 5 days ago
I walk along with only I,
Shadowed by the haunting skies,
Fear asser, I tremble,
I see only what I fear most,
My enemies follow like wolves,
I'm not alone but with my ghosts,
I run and run,
Yet my weakness gains on me,
They catch me and I fall,
I am now one of them,
A haunted spirit roaming free.

Thank you for your advice, I have changed it like you said.
I would love you as my teacher.
I am always looking to write better so thank you.