Honestly - Terrible...Bad...OK...Good... Excellent?

Question:

Honestly - Terrible...Bad...OK...Goo... Excellent?

Please follow the link below and read the new addition. I have posted the third part since many people requested it. I'm afraid it is not as polished as I would like but please have a read and rate both on the blog and on Answers. Thank you

http://blog.360.yahoo.com/blog-3tmkpeq8e...

It is first draft.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: It's great! I'd really like to continue reading this story!