My Fourteenth Christmas, kind of "gruesome"- please give me some feedb

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My Fourteenth Christmas, kind of "gruesome"- please give me some feedback?

My Fourteenth Christmas

My mommy was normal until she met him, Then she turned crazy and went to the asylum.

She finally came home on Christmas day, and thats the last Christmas we'd celebrate.

I was fourteen that Christmas, I remember it well, My Daddy had just gotten out of prison on bail.

I got up that morning to an unpleasant surprise, My mommy and daddy were getting higher with the sunrise.

They were drinking bottles of whiskey and vodka, and the house reeked with the smell of marijuana.

I went and hit behind the couch hoping not to be found, But my Daddy grabbed me and my wrists were bound.

he tied me up and threw me on the floor, then pulled off my clothes and locked the door.

Help I screamed, but no one listened, While he abused me, my face glistened.

he beat on me and bruises swelled on my face, From this, I knew there was no escape.

When he was done he alone in the room, My heart was heavy with gloom.

He came back and passed out on a chair near me, My mommy came in with a knife, i could see.

She walked over to my daddy and tied him up, Then she took up his arm and began to cut.

She cut up his arms aswell as his legs, Of course soon enough he bled to death.

then she took up all the chunks of his flesh, what she did next, you would never guess.

she got a big pot and filled it with water, then she put in the meat and let it get hotter and hotter.

When it was warm she got out a big bowl, and made me eat it, meanwhile I puked out of control.

She made me eat the whole pot by myself, Then when I finished, she went to her shelf.

She grabbed her gun and set me on the chair, She said to hug her, I could only stare.

She held the gun to my head so I obeyed, We embraced each other, then she backed away.

She had her finger on the trigger ready to pull it, the last thing I ever saw alive was a bullet.

It went right beween my eyes, and that is how I came to die.

Now in Heaven I will forever stay, But in Hell my mommy and daddy will pay

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5 days ago
and I realize the form is a little wacked out, that happened when I copied and pasted it.
Sorry.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 5 days ago
and I realize the form is a little wacked out, that happened when I copied and pasted it.
Sorry.