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Rate this poem on the scale of 1 to 10.(also ur comments - if any ammendments r to be made.)?

Have you ever thought who??s destroying the beauty of nature ?
It??s man, only man
Endangered are the lives of other creatures
But he doesn??t care neither he CAN.
Why ???
The answer is not tough to find
For the reason is nothing but he is being very unkind .
To the nature –to the environment
For fulfilling his greedy requirements
But it??s never too late to mend !
HE can still compensate for his atrocious acts
By planting trees, banning poly bags,
And stopping the use of crackers and fags.
LIVE AND LET LIVE?? should be our motto as well,
So that peace and tranquility, all can prevail !


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I love what the poem is about. I adore the thought, although I don't like the way the poem looks, caps, three question marks in a row, too many exclamation points.

I think the begining would be better if it was a statement not a question. We know who is detroying beauty of nature, so tell us again, don't ask us.

I think you are generally asking to much in this poem, I'd prefer to read a peom that has the same message without the distraction of questions.

I rate thee 6, but kudos big time on the message.