Question:
How is this poem?
Hey tell me what you think...I hope you all like it!
Revenge and Justice
The voices were all there, some were rather old,
"Take it your revenge!"
"If you do, I'll have your soul!"
you hear the shot,come to the streets to see,
"Take this your revenge!"
"If you do, you deal with me!"
Why did I do it Lord? How could this be true?
"This is your revenge!"
"Justice will be served to you!"
Revenge got me time, Locked into a steel lair
But Justice let my mind free,
With just a little prayer.
Then one day they let me out,
"The world again we shall see!"
NO said I, Never AGAIN! For scum should not be free
But then we heard the whisper,
In the wind which cannot see,
"Revenge got you in my friend"
"But go now, for Justice set you free!"
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Mm that is pretty interesting, in a great way! I absolutely love the idea... some of your rhythm is thrown off a tad here or there, but I Love the dialogue. I always liek to incorporate dialogue into many of my poems, and for content here on yahoo it's rare to see so that was a refreshing read.
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Keep writing, definitely!!