Ideas and thoughts on my poetry? Saw others getting opinions. id love to hear fr

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Ideas and thoughts on my poetry? Saw others getting opinions. id love to hear from everyone?

I wrote this back when my best friend (who i was in love with) was with another guy for a long time.

Cry of the Woeful Heart

I can feel my heart,
In my chest, in my throat, in my ears??
O what could have been,
What should have been,
But you??re with him.
I neither hate nor despise either or,
But hope for both your happiness?? more and more.
Nonetheless I feel the sharpness between the blades of my right and left shoulder.
The grief compressing my chest like a maleficent boulder.
O Fate! What for did you do this?
Does my hurt and pain have purpose?
Nonetheless I feel the sharpness between the blades of my right and left shoulder.
Memory, Thought, Wonder.
Shall I ever hold her?
Be that Knight in shining armor?
Be that one to charm her?
Like a hammer,
Reality hits.
Reality.
It may never be over,
Between him and her.
So I hope, I pray,
From this very day,
That she brings me along as her friend.
Her friend until the end

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I really like this.If it's autobiographical what you described is TRUE love...which is rare. I've been there. The Universe has better, though, in store for you....just wait...it will come.