Only experts need apply..or maybe not so expert..Am I getting any better???

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Only experts need apply..or maybe not so expert..Am I getting any better???

Thank you for your interest here
Although my poems aren't that clear
I want to please and make you happy
But some of you people are so crappy
I'm not an expert as you can see
But hey I try and that's good for me
It's not so deep and meaningful
It's not so wise and thoughtful
I just want to make you smile
Cause that's what's in my style
Cause that's the best thing on your dial
Sometimes I slip and things don't rhyme
I'm sure I'll be better in time
So humour me and read my lines
Have I committed poet crimes?
The spellings right
The words are tight
The language is quite clear
So don't dilly dally and be a wally
Just give me some idea.

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40 minutes ago
Hey there, insharc I am no Brit.
But I did like your little bit.
I thank you all for your advise
For your time there is no price,
I'll take it in and learn some more.
I'll be back...that's for sure.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 40 minutes ago
Hey there, insharc I am no Brit.
But I did like your little bit.
I thank you all for your advise
For your time there is no price,
I'll take it in and learn some more.
I'll be back...that's for sure.